This game was incredibly captivating from start to finish, I like the storytelling and its very well designed and also a little disturbing - but in a nice way. Im a big fan of this :) Love from Germany
Is there like any reason as to why Eden would pushed Rachel? I mean sure it's pretty much will be ruled out as suicide and thus she could go unpunished .
Eden used the opportunity to tie up loose ends(esp. since Rachel seemed hesitant about ending it and knew that Eden sent the video to her mom) and knew that because of the circumstances, it would easily be ruled as a suicide.
this story left me with a lot of questions, but i really enjoyed it and the toxicity of it all. also the music(?) was VERY unnerving and left me feeling really dreadful which i also appreciate!!!!
Even though I'm a sucker for happy unrealistic fairytale like endings. this was a gut-wrenching realistic horrifically toxic VN and I must commend you on that regard. Out of the (give or take sixteen-ish now?) toxic VN's I've played this is BY FAR the most disturbing ones I've every played.
I love both of their designs but don't think I'll be able to move past how tragic this was despite my admiration and LOVE for their designs. Good work! (even if I feel a fragment of my heart was stolen..!)
cute pubby :)))))))))) OBSESSED with the stark and wriggling presentation, more floored and honestly humbled at the way i felt in horror alongside rachel, and the intimidating way eden carries herself. oh god that ending honestly the more i sit with it the more it torments me. AUUUUGH rachel....
That was really cool!! I felt really bad for Rachel…
spoilers
I didn’t think that Eden was going to kill her in the end. But it seems like her plot all along was to torment Rachel sexually, and then to make sure that her mother made her feel awful, and then to kill her. I kept thinking, “But don’t you want a dog for longer???” but I guess she likes dying dogs more. Poor Rachel…
definitely didn't feel good after playing this (and i mean that in the best way possible!) the artstyle is amazing and the audio tracks are sooo good. you guys did an amazing job to set up scenes where i felt dread and uncomfortable. and also, we LOVE toxic yuri. awesome job!!
I made this account just to comment, I got exactly what was advertised, and it was a little to much for me. Can't say I wasn't warned, I'm gonna go clear my head now. (10/10 writing btw, and I loved the art style)
I love and animations and character designs for both eden and rachel! The art in the vn is well done and and i just love the monochrome aspect of it all.
I think this game wins when it comes to toxicity. You really went all in for the ending in a way that I loved. Some people are critiquing you for not developing Eden enough, which is their opinion and is valid, but in my opinion, I love her as an enigmatic presence. I felt I understood her motivations perfectly in the end, even if I don’t know who she is. She sees someone at their lowest and wonders how much lower can they possibly go? I love writing bad endings, so that’s the kind of mentality I have while writing. Eden was just playing that scenario out in real life.
Wow.. quite harrowing, deeply unnerving. I really wasn't expecting what ultimately happened, multiple times, and I loved it for it. It makes you ponder questions that inspire guilt when you even think of them. Fantastic visuals that really sell the mundane dread!
This felt very much like watching someone be lifted up only to be dropped from a greater height. I'm deeply curious what Eden's story was, she felt like a mystery. Maybe too much of one; it made her feel more like a force than a person to me. Which might've been intentional, since that's kind of a pet-like view of an owner, but it made it hard for me to feel like I understood what she was getting out of the deal (especially given the ending).
Well wasn't expecting that ending though it did get me curious as to why Eden did it and how she sent that video to her mother. Cant wait to see what else you'll cook up.
I absolutely loved this game! But i gotta know, what went through you're brain to create this game? xD this is sadistically beautiful and heartbreaking
oh my god, i actually gasped at the end haha. definitely wasnt expecting that. i absolutely love the art style here and character designs, eden is awesome !! thank you for writing this great piece <3
This is so deliciously toxic! The art is awesome and the animated quality is a great touch. Eden is kinda amazing, I’m so curious about her motivations and methods, I imagine she was fun to write. I felt very in tune with Rachel because whenever her heart raced mine did too lol
Thank you! Eden is a peculiar character since a lot of her true motives aren't really shown to Rachel(and by extension, the player) but that does make her very fun to write!
This game is so good. The art and writing are just incredible, and I liked how it was somewhat animated. The ending was so devastating, and was not at all what I expected in a good way. Great job :)
This was absolutely delightful. The style of the game is consistent throughout, from the writing to the art to the sound. Very enjoyable, loved Eden. Thank you for sharing.
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question is there a reason why eden decided to kill rachel or is she just insane and decided to do it and kill her
I sorta answered this earlier but in Eden's mind Rachel was a loose end that needed tying up.
The circumstances were too good to pass up, and by pushing her she was able to get rid of a liability in such a way that it would be ruled a suicide.
a liability to what every thing was confusing it wwas good tho
This game was incredibly captivating from start to finish, I like the storytelling and its very well designed and also a little disturbing - but in a nice way. Im a big fan of this :) Love from Germany
Thank you for the kind words
Is there like any reason as to why Eden would pushed Rachel? I mean sure it's pretty much will be ruled out as suicide and thus she could go unpunished .
That's pretty much it.
Eden used the opportunity to tie up loose ends(esp. since Rachel seemed hesitant about ending it and knew that Eden sent the video to her mom) and knew that because of the circumstances, it would easily be ruled as a suicide.
Her mom overreaction final boss
holy fucking shit
good game, i liked it
I'm glad, thank you for playing!
Very striking! Big Rachel fan over here
Thank you for playing!
jesus 😭
In all honesty, i think im gonna be sick after playing this, either that or im gonna have nightmares.
Not sure if i should commend you for pulling of the vibes in this game or curse you out for making me feel like this.
this story left me with a lot of questions, but i really enjoyed it and the toxicity of it all. also the music(?) was VERY unnerving and left me feeling really dreadful which i also appreciate!!!!
Thank you for the kind words
Even though I'm a sucker for happy unrealistic fairytale like endings. this was a gut-wrenching realistic horrifically toxic VN and I must commend you on that regard. Out of the (give or take sixteen-ish now?) toxic VN's I've played this is BY FAR the most disturbing ones I've every played.
I love both of their designs but don't think I'll be able to move past how tragic this was despite my admiration and LOVE for their designs. Good work! (even if I feel a fragment of my heart was stolen..!)
Most disturbing is a very high compliment, thank you for playing!
cute pubby :)))))))))) OBSESSED with the stark and wriggling presentation, more floored and honestly humbled at the way i felt in horror alongside rachel, and the intimidating way eden carries herself. oh god that ending honestly the more i sit with it the more it torments me. AUUUUGH rachel....
Thank you so much for playing! Cute pubby indeed :)
ToT that escalated quickly, absolutely love the art, music but damn fuck Eden fr fr, all my homies hate Eden
That was really cool!! I felt really bad for Rachel…
spoilers
I didn’t think that Eden was going to kill her in the end. But it seems like her plot all along was to torment Rachel sexually, and then to make sure that her mother made her feel awful, and then to kill her. I kept thinking, “But don’t you want a dog for longer???” but I guess she likes dying dogs more. Poor Rachel…
Thank you for playing!
Spoilers below:
For Eden, a dog is only worth its provided entertainment. Once that excitement is gone, so too is her need for a dog.
I see!! Poor Rachel :(
definitely didn't feel good after playing this (and i mean that in the best way possible!) the artstyle is amazing and the audio tracks are sooo good. you guys did an amazing job to set up scenes where i felt dread and uncomfortable. and also, we LOVE toxic yuri. awesome job!!
Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad the dread came across as intended
the art was amazing and the atmosphere was impeccable, great work!!
Thank you for the kind words!
I made this account just to comment, I got exactly what was advertised, and it was a little to much for me. Can't say I wasn't warned, I'm gonna go clear my head now.
(10/10 writing btw, and I loved the art style)
Thank you for the kind words!
I love and animations and character designs for both eden and rachel! The art in the vn is well done and and i just love the monochrome aspect of it all.
I'm glad you liked the art, thank you for playing.
I think this game wins when it comes to toxicity. You really went all in for the ending in a way that I loved. Some people are critiquing you for not developing Eden enough, which is their opinion and is valid, but in my opinion, I love her as an enigmatic presence. I felt I understood her motivations perfectly in the end, even if I don’t know who she is. She sees someone at their lowest and wonders how much lower can they possibly go? I love writing bad endings, so that’s the kind of mentality I have while writing. Eden was just playing that scenario out in real life.
Thank you for the kind words!
naming her eden is diabolical. kudos
;^)
eden in a nutshell: "it's free real estate :3"
Wow.. quite harrowing, deeply unnerving. I really wasn't expecting what ultimately happened, multiple times, and I loved it for it. It makes you ponder questions that inspire guilt when you even think of them. Fantastic visuals that really sell the mundane dread!
Thank you for playing!
I'm glad the dread-like atmosphere came across as intended.
This felt very much like watching someone be lifted up only to be dropped from a greater height. I'm deeply curious what Eden's story was, she felt like a mystery. Maybe too much of one; it made her feel more like a force than a person to me. Which might've been intentional, since that's kind of a pet-like view of an owner, but it made it hard for me to feel like I understood what she was getting out of the deal (especially given the ending).
Thank you for the critique!
I definitely wanted to delve further into Eden's motives, but didn't think she'd drop her 'facade' in front of Rachel.
Regardless, thank you for playing!
God the facial expressions give me life- played this with a friend in vc, absolute cinema
Thanks for playing!
That's crazy, I didn't think people would play this in VC.
Suuuuuuper hot
Oh, the fake-out was so good! I was really wondering how Eden would turn out in the end.
So dark and cold. It was refreshing. I especially enjoyed the quality of the prose.
Thank you for the kind words!
Confusing ending, But I really love the Art. I would love to see what will you make on the future ^_^
Thank you for playing, glad you enjoyed the art!
Well wasn't expecting that ending though it did get me curious as to why Eden did it and how she sent that video to her mother.
Cant wait to see what else you'll cook up.
Thank you for playing! I'll leave Eden's motives up to interpretation for now.
"for now"? :3
I absolutely loved this game! But i gotta know, what went through you're brain to create this game? xD this is sadistically beautiful and heartbreaking
A mix of re-watching Saw(2004), wondering what dog food tastes like and being clinically depressed, lol.
Glad you enjoyed it!
oh my god, i actually gasped at the end haha. definitely wasnt expecting that. i absolutely love the art style here and character designs, eden is awesome !! thank you for writing this great piece <3
Thank you for playing! Glad I could catch you off guard lol
This is so deliciously toxic! The art is awesome and the animated quality is a great touch. Eden is kinda amazing, I’m so curious about her motivations and methods, I imagine she was fun to write. I felt very in tune with Rachel because whenever her heart raced mine did too lol
Thank you! Eden is a peculiar character since a lot of her true motives aren't really shown to Rachel(and by extension, the player) but that does make her very fun to write!
This game is so good. The art and writing are just incredible, and I liked how it was somewhat animated. The ending was so devastating, and was not at all what I expected in a good way. Great job :)
Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed, thank you for playing.
This was absolutely delightful. The style of the game is consistent throughout, from the writing to the art to the sound. Very enjoyable, loved Eden. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed it, it means a lot to me.