The Lonely Dog Yearns For Love

Props to releasing a android version! I use a tablet as a main device and I only have it with me atm.
Regarding the plot, writing, visuals and sound... Those were really immersive!
I'm definetly not used to playing such dark plots, but regardless, I've really enjoyed it!
The plot turns were quite unexpected, and surely were interesting 
I've loved that we keep to know only what Rachel knows at all times, so E's decisions feel even more personal.

I have to admit this one may be beyond the limit of what I can handle, but I loved what I did play of it. The art direction is great, the character expressions are so emotive, and Eden is the perfect mix of intimidating, disturbing and alluring in a way that makes the whole scenario click.

question is there a reason why eden decided to kill rachel or is she just insane and decided to do it and kill her

This game was incredibly captivating from start to finish, I like the storytelling and its very well designed and also a little disturbing - but in a nice way. Im a big fan of this :) Love from Germany

Is there like any reason as to why Eden would pushed Rachel? I mean sure it's pretty much will be ruled out as suicide and thus she could go unpunished .

holy fucking shit

good game, i liked it

Very striking! Big Rachel fan over here

 this story left me with a lot of questions, but i really enjoyed it and the toxicity of it all. also the music(?) was VERY unnerving and left me feeling really dreadful which i also appreciate!!!!

Even though I'm a sucker for happy unrealistic fairytale like endings. this was a gut-wrenching realistic horrifically toxic VN and I must commend you on that regard. Out of the (give or take sixteen-ish now?) toxic VN's I've played this is BY FAR the most disturbing ones I've every played.

I love both of their designs but don't think I'll be able to move past how tragic this was despite my admiration and LOVE for their designs. Good work! (even if I feel a fragment of my heart was stolen..!)

cute pubby :)))))))))) OBSESSED with the stark and wriggling presentation, more floored and honestly humbled at the way i felt in horror alongside rachel, and the intimidating way eden carries herself. oh god that ending honestly the more i sit with it the more it torments me. AUUUUGH rachel....

That was really cool!! I felt really bad for Rachel…

definitely didn't feel good after playing this (and i mean that in the best way possible!) the artstyle is amazing and the audio tracks are sooo good. you guys did an amazing job to set up scenes where i felt dread and uncomfortable. and also, we LOVE toxic yuri. awesome job!!

the art was amazing and the atmosphere was impeccable, great work!!

I made this account just to comment, I got exactly what was advertised, and it was a little to much for me. Can't say I wasn't warned, I'm gonna go clear my head now.
(10/10 writing btw, and I loved the art style)

I love and animations and character designs for both eden and rachel! The art in the vn is well done and and i just love the monochrome aspect of it all.

I think this game wins when it comes to toxicity. You really went all in for the ending in a way that I loved. Some people are critiquing you for not developing Eden enough, which is their opinion and is valid, but in my opinion, I love her as an enigmatic presence. I felt I understood her motivations perfectly in the end, even if I don’t know who she is. She sees someone at their lowest and wonders how much lower can they possibly go? I love writing bad endings, so that’s the kind of mentality I have while writing. Eden was just playing that scenario out in real life.

naming her eden is diabolical. kudos

Wow.. quite harrowing, deeply unnerving. I really wasn't expecting what ultimately happened, multiple times, and I loved it for it. It makes you ponder questions that inspire guilt when you even think of them. Fantastic visuals that really sell the mundane dread!

This felt very much like watching someone be lifted up only to be dropped from a greater height. I'm deeply curious what Eden's story was, she felt like a mystery. Maybe too much of one; it made her feel more like a force than a person to me. Which might've been intentional, since that's kind of a pet-like view of an owner, but it made it hard for me to feel like I understood what she was getting out of the deal (especially given the ending).

God the facial expressions give me life- played this with a friend in vc, absolute cinema

Oh, the fake-out was so good! I was really wondering how Eden would turn out in the end.

So dark and cold. It was refreshing. I especially enjoyed the quality of the prose.

Confusing ending, But I really love the Art. I would love to see what will you make on the future ^_^

Well wasn't expecting that ending though it did get me curious as to why Eden did it and how she sent that video to her mother.
Cant wait to see what else you'll cook up.

I absolutely loved this game! But i gotta know, what went through you're brain to create this game? xD this is sadistically beautiful and heartbreaking 

oh my god, i actually gasped at the end haha. definitely wasnt expecting that. i absolutely love the art style here and character designs, eden is awesome !! thank you for writing this great piece <3

This is so deliciously toxic! The art is awesome and the animated quality is a great touch. Eden is kinda amazing, I’m so curious about her motivations and methods, I imagine she was fun to write. I felt very in tune with Rachel because whenever her heart raced mine did too lol

This game is so good. The art and writing are just incredible, and I liked how it was somewhat animated. The ending was so devastating, and was not at all what I expected in a good way. Great job :) 

This was absolutely delightful. The style of the game is consistent throughout, from the writing to the art to the sound. Very enjoyable, loved Eden. Thank you for sharing.